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1 - From a distance, we see the 8TH DOCTOR floating cruciform, upside-down and askew, in the nothing; he is battered, bloodied, and most definitely "dead". There is a Kirby-esque spear through his torso and his sonic screwdriver is nailed into the center of his forehead.
CAPTION: I have watched you wage your private war forever.
2 - Close-up on the 8TH DOCTOR's face. His eyes are rolled up and the bloody sonic screwdriver is flickering out.
CAPTION: I have watched you bleed and die for a Creation that does not acknowledge your presence or thank you.
3 - Same as 2, but pull out a touch, as the TARDIS warps in the background.
CAPTION: I have found you, and lost you, and found you again.
4 - Pull out a touch, as we see the impaled 8TH DOCTOR waver and shine as the regeneration begins, the TARDIS closer now.
CAPTION: And I have sheltered your broken body and mind as you are born again.
5 - Close back in on the head and torso, the TARDIS closer now. The DOCTOR has regenerated, the spear now gone, revealing the clean and unhurt 9TH incarnation.
CAPTION: Because your war continues. Because you are needed.
6 - Close-up on the 9TH DOCTOR's face, framed by the open door of the TARDIS, now right behind him. The DOCTOR's eyes are slammed wide open.
CAPTION: Because I love you.