Wednesday, December 4, 2013

TARDIS – Dude, Where’s Your TARDIS? - MK Stangeland Jr.

(5 Panels)

PANEL 1: View from inside a Police Box, the kind that the TARDIS is disguised to look like. The door is open, and standing in front of it are DOCTOR WHO and EDWARD (new character, no reference.) DOCTOR WHO looks perplexed at what he’s seeing.

PANEL 2: Outside the police box with DOCTOR WHO and EDWARD in LONDON. DOCTOR WHO closes the door.

DOCTOR WHO: That’s not right. That’s not right at all.

EDWARD: This isn’t the TARDIS.

PANEL 3: DOCTOR WHO looks around to see if there’s something he’s missing.

DOCTOR WHO (1): This should be the TARDIS.

DOCTOR WHO (2): I’m certain I left it right here.

PANEL 4: DOCTOR WHO opens the Police Box door again and looks inside to confirm that no, it is not in fact the TARDIS.


EDWARD: You don’t know where your TARDIS is?

PANEL 5: DOCTOR WHO slams the Police Box door shut.

DOCTOR WHO: It’s certainly not here.


EDWARD: Dude, where’s your TARDIS?


1 comment:

  1. For a gag page, this has a lot of depth to it that elevates it. The set up is cute and fun and the doctors voice fits the character perfectly, especially panel 3, it feels exactly like the kind of thing he would say. Plus your send up of Dude,wheres my car comes off really well in that last panel to put a smile on the readers face.


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