Friday, December 6, 2013

The TARDIS - Excellent - Niel Jacoby

Full splash: The TARDIS and the phone booth from Bill and Ted's Excellent Adventure are floating next to each other in the void you see in the DW intro sequence. The Doctor(Smith) and his companion(Clara) are staring in disbelief as they lean out the TARDIS door, and Bill S. Preston, Esq., Ted "Theodore" Logan, Ulysses S. Grant, Ada Lovelace, Catherine The Great, Andre The Giant(who is poking part of his upper body out the broken window of one of the sides just to fit), and Confucius look in amazement out of the phone booth.

Clara, The Doctor, Grant, Ted, Bill, Ada, Catherine, and Confucius: WHOOOOOA!



  1. If this was a page one all up front splash page I would so be in for that issue. What a gripping opening, so many odd elements at play that just leaving me with so many questions I want the answers to. Great use of a splash page sir.


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