Thursday, January 9, 2014

Batmobile – Goodbye Horses - Shaun Richens.

PAGE ONE – 6 PANELS.

All page wide panels.

1.1
Int. THE BATCAVE. Birds eye view looking down onto the BATMOBILE. The bonnet is up and open, a small amount of smoke pours from several parts of the engine. Light punctures through a smattering of bullet holes in the bonnet.

From underneath the front end of the car we can see BRUCE WAYNES legs, he is still wearing the bottom half of his BATMAN armour.

NO COPY.

1.2
Ext. GOTHAM CITY. The batmobile speeds down an empty street, in a run down and seemingly abandoned part of downtown Gotham. The night sky is filled with heavy snow and a hail of bullets.

SFX:
Blam Blam Blam.

1.3
Int. The Batcave. Profile view of the batmobile. Bruce Wayne is still underneath, he wears a white vest, which is covered in oil and grease on his top half, he has a set of tools laid out next to him and a torch held between his teeth lighting the underside of the Batmobile as he works

NO COPY.

1.4
Ext. Gotham City. The Batmobile drifts around a sharp corner, snow is kicked up over the road all around the screeching tires. The backend of the Batmobile nearly clipping a building.

SFX:
Screech

1.5
Int. The Batcave. Bruce Wayne, stands with his back to us looking at the Batmobile, we can see the all of the car for the first time here. It has flat tires, smoke now really pouring from the engine, the backend dented, its in the worst way we have ever seen it.

Bruce wipes sweat from his forehead with his forearm. His hands are covered in oil and grease.

CAPTION BRUCE WAYNE:
I'll get you fixed.

1.6
The waterfall entrance to the Batcave. The front of the Batmobile is inside the cave, the water spills all over the car running off its sides. The drivers side door is swung open and a bloodied and beaten BATAMAN, in full armour collapses out of it.

CAPTION BRUCE WAYNE:
Because you got me home.


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