1 – Extreme close-up of a bright
orange light. It's the Batmobile's engine light, although that isn't
obvious from this panel.
ROBIN (off-panel): That doesn't concern
you?
2 – Pull back to the cockpit (front
seat?) of the Batmobile. The orange engine light is still visible
and glowing brightly on the dashboard, but the main focus is Batman
driving the car and Robin in the passenger seat. Batman is steely as
ever, while Robin is on the defensive from Batman's insistent words.
This should be the main panel of the page.
BATMAN (1): Not in the slightest.
BATMAN (2): I built the Batmobile with
my own two hands, carefully selecting every piece and component.
BATMAN (3): I know everything there is
to know about this car.
BATMAN (4): And I know that that light
is wrong.
ROBIN: Oookay...
3 – Insert
panel. The Batmobile is stopped on the side of the road, a dense
black smoke billowing out from its hood. Batman and Robin stand in
front of the vehicle, Batman looking frustrated and annoyed and Robin
scratching his head awkwardly and looking off to the side to avoid
eye contact. Both their word balloons have images instead of words
(this panel could almost be in Dustin Nguyen's chibi style that comes
up in Li'l Gotham on occasion).
ROBIN: ...
BATMAN: [a black
squiggle of frustration that shares similarities with the cloud
emanating from the Batmobile]
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