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ONE – 5 PANELS
1.1
PAGE
WIDE PANEL. A monstrously large alien beast lies unconscious in the
road. Smashed and abandoned cars line the street.
D4VE
stands atop the beast in full hero mode. He looks confident and cool,
he casually leans his elbow on the butt of an infeasibly big chrome
gun.
A
crowd has gathered. They listen silently as D4ve speaks. Looking up
at him like a god.
D4VE:
...And
the day is won.
Once
again metal is mightier than flesh.
1.2
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WIDE PANEL. Repeat of 1.1 The crowd have erupted into cheers and
chanting.
D4VE
has dropped his head, looking to the floor. His eye closed. One arm
raised in the air fist closed (Think Judd Nelson at the end of The
Breakfast Club) D4ve is loving every, single second of this.
THE
CROWD:
D4VE.
D4VE. D4VE. D4VE.
1.3
Close
up on hero D4VE.
S4LLY(O.P):
D4ve
1.4
The
blurry outline of S4LLY as she leans over the couch. We're looking at
her from the couch. From D4VES POV.
S4LLY:
Boot
the fuck up D4ve, you're guna be late for work.
1.5
Birds
eye view. Looking straight down onto D4VE. He lies on the couch. One
arm behind his head. He's still wearing his shirt from the day
before.
D4VE:
Job
damn.
Great page Shaun. The opening panel is very Starship Troopers. And I love "Boot the fuck up" :D
ReplyDeleteIn 1.4 I think it would be great if D4VE's vision was pixelated instead of blurred.