Thursday, January 23, 2014

Samurai Jack - The Pirates of Time - J.D. Coughlan


Panel 1: Jack, in a dark alley, turns as a time portal opens behind him.

JACK: A time portal!

Panel 2: Jack running towards the portal.

JACK: At last, I can return home!

Panel 3: A bunch of steampunk-looking pirates burst forth from the portal, their captain, Kronux, knocks Jack down.

KRONUX: AH-HARR!

JACK: OOF!

Panel 4: Wide shot. Jack is already leaping to his feet, hand on his sword. Kronux points his own sword at Jack. The portal is closing.

KRONUX: Samurai Jack! I am Captain Kronux of the timeship Eternity's Gold! We are the Pirates of Time!

KRONUX: My crew and I have sailed the seven eons, plundering treasures from across history, but their is one we yet seek...

KRONUX: YOUR HEAD!

Panel 5: Close on Jack, his eyes in a death stare.

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Panel 6: Jack launches himself towards Kronux, sword drawn. Kronux takes a defensive stance, a look of glee on his face.

JACK: YAH!

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1 comment:

  1. American Zombie (R. A. Wonsowski)January 24, 2014 at 12:37 AM

    Wow...not only do you create a fun and engaging villain, you manage to capture Tartakovsky's sense of fun and high adventure. Nice page J.D.

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