Saturday, January 11, 2014

The Batmobile - Born This Way - R.A.Wonsowski

Setting: interior, the Batcave.

Panel 1 - BATMAN slips into the driver's seat of the Batmobile, settling into the seat, ready for action.

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Panel 2 - Interior Batmobile, BATMAN turns the ignition on the Batmobile.

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Panel 3 - Same as Panel 2, except the radio blasts full volume, BATMAN cringes in pain at the blaring noise as he tries to cover his ears

BATMOBILE RADIO:  RAH-RAH-AH-AH-AH-AH!!  ROMA-ROMA-MAMAA!!  GA-GA-OOHLALA!!

Panel 4 - Same as Panel 3, but now BATMAN just looks extremely annoyed.

BATMOBILE RADIO:  CAN'T READ MY - CAN'T READ MY - NO HE CAN'T READ MY POKER FACE!!!

Panel 5 - BATMAN is now standing outside the idling Batmobile in the cave.  He's growling, fists clenched, in annoyed anger at ALFRED, who is standing proudly at attention, holding a feather duster and sporting a black Lady Gaga lightning bolt over his right eye.

ALFRED:  It's true, Master Wayne.  I admit it, I am one of her..."Little Monsters"

BATMAN:  I don't care, just turn it back down when you're done!!

1 comment:

  1. Very funny piece, I can imagine an artist having fun with Batman's facial expressions, but I think the dialogue ruins it. It would be a much funnier "silent" page.

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