Saturday, February 1, 2014

D4VE - ...B3CAUSE D1N05AURS. - R.A. Wonsowski


Layout: 3 rows of 2

Panel 1 - D4VE sits relaxed on a park bench in Central Park, NYC, his back to the New York City Skyline in the background. It's a blue-sky, sunny day and all is right and cheerful.

NO COPY


Panel 2 - Same as Panel 1, except the buildings and trees are vibrating.

OFF-PANEL:  ROOAAARRR!!!!!


Panel 3 - Same as above, except buildings start to shatter as GINORMOUS ROBOTIC KAIJU versions of the DINOSAURS from Disney's Fantasia start fighting.
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TYRANNOSAUR:  RRAAAAARRRRR!!!!


Panel 4 - They continue to fight as they exit to the right.  D4VE hangs his head low in despair.  Buildings begin to fall over.

SoundFX:  rrrRRUUMMBBLLLLLeee

Sound FX:  KSSHH!!!!


Panel 5 - Same as above, but the dinosaurs are completely gone from the panel.  D4VE looks completely dejected.

OFF-PANEL:  CRASH!!!!!!!


Panel 6 - D4VE, his body language looking depressed, begins rolling up his shirt sleeves as he walks off after the dinosaurs, ready (kinda) to take them on.

D4VE:  ...I'm getting too old for this 5H1T.

1 comment:

  1. :) I really like that he never turns around. Cool script R.A. Robots and Dinosaurs. What's not to love?

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