Great use of the comic medium. The use of font to show a change in voice is an under explored technique. You use it in a fun little way here that works perfectly for the style of this strip. 4/5
This may be the gag of the week. (Is that the Jokerman font in the last panel?!?) Well scripted strip that delivers the punchline perfectly. Kudos.
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