As always your comedy timing is perfect. I am impressed how well you pull off each of your beats given you had to work around a preexisting structure. Panels 2 and 6 use the images you had to the very best effect. Panel 6 looks so much better on the page than a script with just NO COPY on ever could. The art sells your wonderfully meta and deconstructive page.
Feedback is what every good writer wants and needs, so please provide it in the white box below -OR- If you want to play along at home, feel free to put your scripts under the Why? post for the week.
Last Panel: *Mind. BLOWN!*
ReplyDeleteAs always your comedy timing is perfect. I am impressed how well you pull off each of your beats given you had to work around a preexisting structure. Panels 2 and 6 use the images you had to the very best effect. Panel 6 looks so much better on the page than a script with just NO COPY on ever could. The art sells your wonderfully meta and deconstructive page.
ReplyDelete5/5 stars!