Snappy dialogue about an unexpected subject. You make excellent use of the images you have to work with, for instance in that 5th panel Rex has snapped his head back around in surprise at the Nokia reveal. I can't help but love how gleeful Rex looks waving his arms in the air (like he just don't care) in that last panel too. He looks like he just found the perfect dress for prom. Killer page to open your week.
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Snappy dialogue about an unexpected subject. You make excellent use of the images you have to work with, for instance in that 5th panel Rex has snapped his head back around in surprise at the Nokia reveal. I can't help but love how gleeful Rex looks waving his arms in the air (like he just don't care) in that last panel too. He looks like he just found the perfect dress for prom. Killer page to open your week.
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