ONE PAGE – 5 PANELS.
Close up on DK. He is eating a banana.
Still tight on DK. He has finished the banana and holds the left over skin in one hand.
DK winks at us the reader.
DK is throwing the banana peel over his shoulder out of panel.
Large panel. Ext the Luigi Circuit from Mario Kart. Its a bright and clear day. DK speeds towards us in his go-kart inches from the finishing line, his tie flying behind him. Mario in his own go-kart is spinning off the track, birds circle his head as he gets dizzy. In the centre of the tack is the cause of the spin. DK's banana peel.
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