Panel 1: we see 2 plumbers in the boiler room of a building. One is thin and wears a green shirt under his overalls, the other is rotund and wears a red shirt under his. They are hard at work.
NO COPY
Panel 2: The building is rattled and steam starts shooting out from many places, startling the plumbers.
SFX: K-KKKKSKSKHSHSHSH!
Panel 3: The plumbers are running through the building lobby, and are surprised to see shipping containers falling around them.
SFX: KSSHHH! KRRRRKKKK! WHHHHHHHN!
Panel 4: The plumbers look up through a hole in the ceiling, and see a giant monkey on what is left of the top floor, a shipping plane in one hand, a beautiful woman in the other.
Monkey: GGGGGGGGGGRRRRRRRRAARAAAAAARAAAAAR!
Not going to lie, this is kind of a lackluster script as far as I can tell.
ReplyDeleteYeah, not one of my best.
ReplyDeleteI like the idea, but as MK says, it's missing a certain je ne sais quoi to make the whole thing sing.
ReplyDeleteI totally dig the ideas. The opening two panels make for a nice build and your smashing of universes is super fun and a neat theme to play with. I's just love to seen this expanded upon slightly. This was good, but could have been a killer page.
ReplyDelete2.5/5