Saturday, February 15, 2014

Injustice - Displacement - Brian Manton

Splash Page

A Lexcorp laboratory - completely automated and unmanned. Vital signs are displayed across rows of incubators - a baby lies sleeping in each one.

In the centre of the room Zatanna lies restrained to a hospital trolley. She looks drugged and emaciated.

CAP: And then, two heartbeats coming from one person - stop beating.

Zatana: --vasmihevasmihevasmihevasmihevasmihevasmihevasmihevasmihevasmihevasmihevasmihevasmihevasmihevasmihevasmihevasmihevasmihevasmihe--

1 comment:

  1. I don't know if this is heartbreakingly creepy or creepily heartbreaking. Z' dying and wasting away in such surroundings, backwards pleading,... *shudder*
    The words in direct contrast to the image heightens both. Great splash.


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