Friday, February 14, 2014

Injustice - Turn - Niel Jacoby

Panel 1: Superman stands in the Hall Of Justice meeting room, addressing the other members of the Justice League. He is forlorn.

Superman: IN LIGHT OF THE RECENT HAPPENINGS IN MY PERSONAL LIFE, I FIND MYSELF TOO HEARTBROKEN TO PROPERLY LEAD THIS TEAM.

Panel 2: Superman is hanging his head in sorrow, still addressing the Justice League. We cannot see the wall behind him. The rest of the League is shocked.

Superman: AND SO, I ANNOUNCE MY RETIREMENT FROM THE JUSTICE LEAGUE...

SFX(from off panel, behind Superman): KRRRRSHHSSHSHSHSHSS

Panel 3: Straight on shot as Superman, his face in an evil grin, is ripping the shirt of his Superman suit in half to reveal a T-Shirt with a Legion Of Doom logo, and we see the Legion Of Doom busting through the wall behind him.

Superman: EFFECTIVE... IMMEDIATELY.

1 comment:

  1. "Meanwhile, at the Hall of Justice..."
    On the one hand, my love-hate relationship with the Super Friends cartoons of my childhood digs this. (Legion of Doom was some cool doings).
    On the other, considering the events of Injustice, I get the feeling that Superman would kill the LoD rather than join them.
    Still, cool stuff...

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