Saturday, February 8, 2014

Red Hulk - Through discipline... - Brian Manton

Wide. A site of devastation - A small city in the aftermath of the Hulk. The National Guard head the emergency relief.

 CAP: We knew the world would not be the same.

Thunderbolt Ross standing by a makeshift hospital tent. His back to us, he looks out over the smouldering city.
CAP: A few people laughed, a few people cried. Most people were silent.

Doc Samson’s laboratory. Ross and Doc Samson having a heated argument.

 CAP: I remembered the line from the Hindu scripture, the Bhagavad-Gita. Vishnu is trying to persuade the Prince that he should do his duty, and, to impress him, takes on his multi-armed form and says,

Thin wide panel. The Red Hulk’s eyes - full of rage.

 CAP:  'Now I am become Death, the destroyer of worlds.'

Wide. Nevada desert flatlands. Ross in the tattered remnants of his uniform, on his knees, exhausted.

 CAP: I suppose we all thought that, one way or another.

- Robert Oppenheimer

1 comment:

  1. This would be a perfect opening page for a much deeper story. It makes the reader want to fill in the holes. It made me want those panels connected. You tease that bigger story incredibly well, and the captions set the tone, the action between the panels, and that weariness that Ross carries. Really neat page, sir...


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