Monday, March 24, 2014
The Darkness - Afraid of the Dark - Ben Rosenthal
1. Jackie is on the floor, bloody. He is looking at something off panel in fear.
CAPTION (Jackie)
I've never been afraid of the dark.
2. A close up of Jackie's face. A drop of blood comes from his eye, looking like a tear.
CAPTION (Jackie)
It was always inside of me. A part of me.
I had nothing to fear from the Darkness.
3. We are now looking at what Jackie is petrified of - it is his Darklings amalgamated together and in possession of The Darkness. They stand over him, red sharp ends ready to continue the cutting.
CAPTION
Now I get it.
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