Monday, March 24, 2014

The Darkness - Afraid of the Dark - Ben Rosenthal


1.  Jackie is on the floor, bloody.  He is looking at something off panel in fear.

CAPTION (Jackie)
I've never been afraid of the dark.


2.  A close up of Jackie's face.  A drop of blood comes from his eye, looking like a tear.

CAPTION (Jackie)
It was always inside of me.  A part of me.
I had nothing to fear from the Darkness.


3.  We are now looking at what Jackie is petrified of - it is his Darklings amalgamated together and in possession of The Darkness.  They stand over him, red sharp ends ready to continue the cutting.

CAPTION
Now I get it.


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