Sorry I'm late. Was travelling and could not find a computer to post this from.
There would be four rows here. Row one would be made up of panels 1 through 3, row two of panels 4 through 7, row three of panels 8 through 11, and row four of panels 12 through 14.
1 - Outside a cafe of some variety. Let's go with big ol' sign outside that reads "Gene's".
JOHNNY STORM (from within): So what's it like talking to birds?
2 - Interior. Johnny Storm and Samuel Wilson sit opposite each other at a booth. Johnny is lazing back, one arm lain across the back of the back of his chair, holding a milkshake in his other hand. Samuel sits straight, a coffee in front of him - he has one hand resting next to the cup and the other up in conversation.
SAMUEL WILSON: Talk is a bit strong. It's more like I can see what they see, think what they think.
JOHNNY STORM: Oh.
3 - Johnny sits up a bit, leaning closer to Sam to hear what the story is. Sam is pretty nonchalant about it, taking a sip of his coffee.
JOHNNY STORM: So, uh, what do they think about?
SAMUEL WILSON: Well..
4 - A small robin flits from one branch to another.
ROBIN: Look at me fly!
5 - A pigeon flies through the city air.
PIGEON: Flying is the best!
6 - A group of small birds are beginning to take flight from their position in a park.
GROUP OF SMALL BIRDS: Let's fly!
7 - A crow perches atop some telephone wire outside.
CROW: I wish I was flying right now.
8 - A group of Canada geese fly in their signature 'V'. Two are in conversation.
GOOSE 1: Flying's so great!
GOOSE 2: Right?!
9 - A small group of ducks mill around an old women who sits on a bench throwing them bread. The birds are in various states of gobbling up their windfall, although one stands slightly apart, a thought on his mind.
DUCK: This bread is great and all, but I'd rather be flying.
10 - Some penguins in the zoo look up sadly / forlornly towards some birds flying above them in the distance.
PENGUIN: One day...
11 - Redwing soars majestically through the air, likely doing something important and Avenger-y.
12 - Similar panel to panel 3. Johnny holds the same position. Sam puts his coffee cup back down.
13 - Repeat panel 12, except Johnny looks somewhat perplexed. Sam's expression is still neutral.
JOHNNY STORM: Huh.
SAMUEL WILSON: Yep.
14 - Johnny shrugs, smiling wide. Sam shares a small smile with him.
JOHNNY STORM: Well, they're not wrong.
SAMUEL WILSON: Nope.
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