Saturday, April 19, 2014

Headspace - The Recess - R.A. Wonsowski

Layout: 2x3

Panel 1 - Through the mouth of the crevasse, we see the Cove across the lake at a very dim twilight.

CAPTION:  I take one last look back before I go into the recess. Night falls like a kiss from a creepy uncle.

Panel 2 - Dark gray rock walls, going up and on into the dark forever, no end to the depth.

CAPTION:  Last time with the flashlight was disorienting. Spots danced and played hell on my eyes whenever I swung it around.

Panel 3 - Black.

CAPTION:  This time I'll let my night eyes adjust. Go in blind. In my head, I sing like Mama used to when the power'd go out.

Panel 4 - Black.

CAPTION:  Amazing grace, how sweet the sound...that saved a wretch like me...

Panel 5 - Black.

CAPTION:  I once was lost...

CAPTION: ...god...

CAPTION:  ...but now....

Panel 6:  Black, except for the impossible gleam of a knife edge.

CAPTION (someone else):  ...i see...

Congratulations RKL and Mr Hill on your success!  And thanks again for letting me play in your sandboxes...

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