Layout: 2x3
Panel 1 - Through the mouth of the crevasse, we see the Cove across the lake at a very dim twilight.
CAPTION: I take one last look back before I go into the recess. Night falls like a kiss from a creepy uncle.
Panel 2 - Dark gray rock walls, going up and on into the dark forever, no end to the depth.
CAPTION: Last time with the flashlight was disorienting. Spots danced and played hell on my eyes whenever I swung it around.
Panel 3 - Black.
CAPTION: This time I'll let my night eyes adjust. Go in blind. In my head, I sing like Mama used to when the power'd go out.
Panel 4 - Black.
CAPTION: Amazing grace, how sweet the sound...that saved a wretch like me...
Panel 5 - Black.
CAPTION: I once was lost...
CAPTION: ...god...
CAPTION: ...but now....
Panel 6: Black, except for the impossible gleam of a knife edge.
CAPTION (someone else): ...i see...
Congratulations RKL and Mr Hill on your success! And thanks again for letting me play in your sandboxes...
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