Wednesday, April 23, 2014

Prophet – Stop Killing Yourself – MK Stangeland Jr.


(Yeah, I know, I am so mature.)

(6 Panels)

Panel 1: JOHN PROPHET, the original, is on the center of a narrow, naturally formed rock bridge facing off against a hoard of his clones. He has just cut across the chest of one of them.

SFX: ShlIK!

PROPHET: Quit killing yourself!

Panel 2: PROPHET kicks one of the clones off the bridge as he stabs his sword into another one.

KICKED CLONE: AHHH!

PROPHET (1): Quit killing yourself!

SFX: shink

PROPHET (2): Quit killing yourself!

Panel 3: A CLONE blocks PROPHET’s sword with his own blade.

SFX: TING!

CLONE: Would you stop saying…!

Panel 4: PROPHET hits the CLONE in the gut with his fist.

CLONE: Ugh!

Panel 5: PROPHET brings his sword down to stab the CLONE in the back.

Panel 6: View from below as the CLONE falls off the bridge while PROPHET keeps fighting up above.

PROPHET: Quit killing yourself!

(END PAGE)

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