(Yeah, I know, I am so mature.)
(6 Panels)
Panel 1: JOHN PROPHET, the original, is on the center
of a narrow, naturally formed rock bridge facing off against a hoard of his
clones. He has just cut across the chest of one of them.
SFX: ShlIK!
PROPHET: Quit killing yourself!
Panel 2: PROPHET kicks one of the clones off the
bridge as he stabs his sword into another one.
KICKED CLONE: AHHH!
PROPHET (1): Quit killing yourself!
SFX: shink
PROPHET (2): Quit killing yourself!
Panel 3: A CLONE blocks PROPHET’s sword with his own
blade.
SFX: TING!
CLONE: Would you stop saying…!
Panel 4: PROPHET hits the CLONE in the gut with his
fist.
CLONE: Ugh!
Panel 5: PROPHET brings his sword down to stab the
CLONE in the back.
Panel 6: View from below as the CLONE falls off the
bridge while PROPHET keeps fighting up above.
PROPHET: Quit killing yourself!
(END PAGE)
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