(Important information - KING RUMBLER is a giant 'wild' robot, KWAN SATOMI - SATOMI - is the main character of this story, and F-SIERRAH is one of three fighting robots that she commands.)
Page 12 (9 Panels)
Panel 1: Close up on a portion of KING RUMBLER as a sonic cannon pops out.
Panel 2: KING RUMBLER fires its sonic cannon at SATOMI. It hits her, knocking her off her feet. She screams as she covers her ears in pain.
SFX: (Sonic Cannon) Wrr-wrr-wrr-wrr-wrr-
SATOMI: (SFX) Eeeaak!
Panel 3: KING RUMBLER opens it’s ‘mouth’ and charges a high-powered energy weapon.
SFX: (Energy Cannon) tzzzZZZZZZZZZ
Panel 4: F-SIERRAH flies up into the sky.
Panel 5: F-SIERRAH flies towards the panel with the sun directly behind it.
Panel 6: F-SIERRAH flies towards KING RUMBLER and shoots a light missile at its head.
SFX: (Missile firing) pfew!
Panel 7: The missile hits KING RUMBLER in the side of the head. The head is knocked sideways as a result, causing the energy beam the robot was about to fire to go off in a random direction, completely missing SATOMI.
SFX: (Missile Impact) bkuum!
SFX: (Energy weapon firing) BTZUUM!
Panel 8: F-SIERRAH flies past KING RUMBLER’s head as it roars in anger.
KING RUMBLER: GRAAHHHHWR!
Panel 9: SATOMI, having just picked herself up, has a happy look on her face as she thinks things are starting to turn around for her.
It is a great, high energy page, as a good fight scene should, and shows off a little of Satomi's spunk. I'd love to know a bit more about her though, a caption or two giving us a little insight into her character. Fun page all around.ReplyDelete
Believe me, in the script I pulled this page from, you get to know a lot about her character.Delete
I wasn't kidding when I said I lifted this directly from a script I'd already written. Between the page number and Satomi's last line, I didn't change a single thing before posting it here.
Hi MK Stangeland,ReplyDelete
This is such a great script... In fact I would really like to know little more about her. It is really very fun to read... Thanks for sharing. I would look forward to read more post.