Wednesday, May 14, 2014

Delilah Dirk – Bigger, Better, More Absurd – MK Stangeland Jr.


(2 Panels)

Panel 1: SPLASH PAGE.

The FLYING FRIGATE, a scaled-up and heavily militarized version of DELILAH’s flying ship, exits its construction/launch bay and its sails begin to spread.

DELILAH DIRK and ERDEMOGLU SELIM watch from their nearby, hidden location as the ship launches.

Panel 2: Small, corner panel, looking towards DELILAH and SELIM as they react. SELIM looks wide eyed with shock and surprise in a ‘look at the size of that thing that is FLYING!(!![!!!!!])’ kind of way. DELILAH looks irritated, though she’s far more passive in her own reaction.

SELIM: That…it…how…but…it…that…it…

DELILAH: I believe that I am starting to regret not stabbing Mr. Lunzwit when I had the chance.

(END PAGE)

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