Wednesday, June 25, 2014

Spider-Ham – The Human Strikes! – MK Stangeland Jr.

(3 Panels)

Panel 1: SPIDER-HAM is standing just inside what looks like a wrecked laboratory.

SPIDER-HAM: Dr. Connors, what have you done?

DR. CONNORS: (From off-panel) What have I done? I’ve unleashed my true potential and unlocked unparalleled power!

Panel 2: The shadowy form of DR. KOMODO CONNORS.

DR. CONNORS (1): I’ve managed to become the most dangerous and powerful animal of them all!

DR. CONNERS (2): From this day forth, I shall be knows as…

Panel 3: Reveal of DR. KOMODO CONNORS new form – he looks like DR. CURT CONNORS if he had both his arms, and looks like he’s much larger than SPIDER-HAM.



1 comment:

  1. Well paced and gets the point across without dragging it out. Good work.


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