Monday, July 14, 2014

Warriors Three - Three Men - Ben Rosenthal



1.  Close up of Fandral, torso up.  He is looking down to something that is in front of him (off panel).  .  What we can see of the background behind him is dark.  He looks confused.

FANDRAL
Well, this is a unique situation.


2.  Close up of Hogun, same framing as Fandral in the previous panel, and is also looking down at the off panel object.  His grim, stone-faced expression reveals nothing other than he is not happy about this situation.

HOGUN
It is a trap.  Dispose of it.


3.  Once again, same framing on a close up of  Volstaag also looking at the object below off panel.  He is happy with the object.

VOLSTAAG
Nonsense.  He may be a lot of things--


4.  High shot of looking down at the Warrior's Three.  They are looking at a small baby Loki in the middle of them.

VOLSTAAG
But he has never been so cute!


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Yeah - Warriors Three and a Baby.  
I would write the hell out of this.


4 comments:

  1. And I would so very much read such a comic as written by you, as well.

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  2. This is the best. I literally cannot think of a Marvel book I would rather be reading. That final line seals it.

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  3. I'd read the hell out of this too. Great set-up, and using baby Loki just seals it.

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  4. I'm just imagining the trade dress on this thing, in the fashion of the movie poster. So full of awesome. I have no doubt that you would pull this off in grand fashion. Take a bow, Ben.

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