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(As with other scripts this week, this page is taken from my entry to last years talent hunt, written around the EMBER STONE.)
Panel 1: Fire flows from DRAGON JANUS’ mouth as he
tries to shoot BALDRIC with it. BALDRIC rolls forwards past DRAGON JANUS’ fire
blast.
Panel 2: BALDRIC swings his sword at DRAGON JANUS.
DRAGON JANUS retreats back into the air far enough for the sword to miss him.
BALDRIC: Die, beast!
Panel 3: BALDRIC falls back and deflects a glancing burst
of flame from DRAGON JANUS’ mouth.
SFX: (From DRAGON
JANUS’ fire.) ghOOSHHHH!
Panel 4: DRAGON JANUS swings his tail to slam BALDRIC
against a rock surface. BALDRIC holds his shield between himself and the tail
for protection, but it doesn’t provide him with much.
SFX: (From tail impact.)
wack!
SFX: (From BALDRIC
hitting the rock surface) wam!
BALDRIC: Ugph!
Panel 5: DRAGON JANUS’ tail has pulled away from
BALRDIC. DRAGON JANUS swipes his claws at BALDRIC.
BALDRIC drops his
sword and uses his shield to protect himself from the claws, but he is clearly
off-balance.
Panel 6: DRAGON JANUS uses his wings to create a
burst of wind that knocks BALDRIC off the pathway.
SFX: WOOSH!
BALDRIC: AAH!
(END PAGE)
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