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Panel 1: Profile shot. Hawk
is grabbing a thug by the shirt, pulling him in close and screaming in his
face.
HAWK: Five crates full of assault rifles!
They didn’t just materialize out of thin air!
HAWK: WHO IS THE SUPPLIER?
Panel 2: Close-up of Hawk’s
fist smashing into the thug’s face, breaking his nose.
HAWK: WHO!?!
Panel 3: Close-up of Hawk’s other
fist crushing the thug’s jaw. Teeth and blood fly from the impact.
HAWK: IS!?!
Panel 4: Close-up of Hawk’s
fist pounding into the thug’s eye.
HAWK: YOUR!?!
Panel 5: Another punch by Hawk,
further demolishing the thug’s already ruined face.
HAWK: SUPPLIER!?!
Panel 6: Hawk
stands over the bloodied, battered, unconscious thug. The thug’s body slumps to
the floor. Dove stands behind Hawk, covering his eyes.
DOVE: Are you finished?
Panel 7: Close-up
of Hawk. His face is contorted with violence and rage.
HAWK: Finished?
Panel 8: Three
other thugs sit huddled in the corner. Their faces are filled with terror as
the shadow of Hawk looms over them.
HAWK (OFF-PANEL): I haven’t even started…
This would've been right at home in H&D's late 70s Titans West days. It's got that Neal Adams-ish vibe, and panel 6 is a great beat for breath before 7 and 8. Classic construction with great Bronze Age feel. Nice page, Travis.
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