Panel 1: Profile shot. Hawk is grabbing a thug by the shirt, pulling him in close and screaming in his face.
HAWK: Five crates full of assault rifles! They didn’t just materialize out of thin air!
HAWK: WHO IS THE SUPPLIER?
Panel 2: Close-up of Hawk’s fist smashing into the thug’s face, breaking his nose.
Panel 3: Close-up of Hawk’s other fist crushing the thug’s jaw. Teeth and blood fly from the impact.
Panel 4: Close-up of Hawk’s fist pounding into the thug’s eye.
Panel 5: Another punch by Hawk, further demolishing the thug’s already ruined face.
Panel 6: Hawk stands over the bloodied, battered, unconscious thug. The thug’s body slumps to the floor. Dove stands behind Hawk, covering his eyes.
DOVE: Are you finished?
Panel 7: Close-up of Hawk. His face is contorted with violence and rage.
Panel 8: Three other thugs sit huddled in the corner. Their faces are filled with terror as the shadow of Hawk looms over them.
HAWK (OFF-PANEL): I haven’t even started…
This would've been right at home in H&D's late 70s Titans West days. It's got that Neal Adams-ish vibe, and panel 6 is a great beat for breath before 7 and 8. Classic construction with great Bronze Age feel. Nice page, Travis.ReplyDelete