Wednesday, June 10, 2015

Transitions – Telephone of DOOM! – MK Stangeland Jr.

(5 Panels)

Panel 1: REED RICHARDS and SPIDER-MAN are in REED RICHARDS lab.

RICHARDS (1): Victor may be a terrible person, but he has my pity.

RICHARDS (2): It truly is sad that he’s so devoted his mind to such selfish pursuits.

Panel 2: SPIDER-MAN and DEADPOOL – SPIDER-MAN is sitting on top of a light pole eating a hot dog, while DEADPOOL is hanging from a web wedgie.

SPIDER-MAN (1): I’m not sure what to think.

SPIDER-MAN (2): We all know what kind of guy Dr. Doom is, but here’s Reed talking about how he pities the man and how sad it all is.

DEADPOOL: (Yellow Text Box) I think I’m starting to ride up here.

DEADPOOL (2): (Yellow Text Box) Well, more ride up.

Panel 3: DEADPOOL and LOKI – LOKI has a miniaturized DEADPOOL trapped inside a snow globe. DEADPOOL is dressed up to look like LOKI.

DEADPOOL (1): So then, he tells me how sad Mr. Fantastic thinks Dr. Doom is and how pitiful the whole situation is.

DEADPOOL (2): (Yellow Text Box) Did I get that backwards?

DEADPOOL (3): (Yellow Text Box) I think I got that backwards.

Panel 4: DR. DOOM in front of a large computer array, the likes of which you classically find inside of mad scientist and evil villain lairs. LOKI appears on the largest screen.

DR. DOOM (1): WHO DARES CALL DOOM!?

DR. DOOM (2): And how did you get this number?!

LOKI (1): Hello, Victor.

LOKI (2): I thought you might like to hear that Reed Richards has been talking smack about how sad and pitiful you are.

LOKI (3): Though I think we both knew that already.

Panel 5: Close up on DR. DOOM, in a classic ‘hands up in the air as he shouts in anger’ pose.

DR. DOOM: RICHAAAAAAAAAAAAAARDS!


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2 comments:

  1. Haha. Lovely game of telephone here, with some choice lines by Spidey and Doom (the "how did you get this number?" follow-up brought a smile to my face).

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  2. Best game of Telephone ever! Panels 4 and 5 are absolutely spot on, just begging for some classic line work like from Buscema or Simonson. Too fun!

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