Friday, September 4, 2015

Grendel - Man Up - Liam Lachance

1
(torso of white woman, with muscular and figurine-sized man on shoulder)

MAN (GRENDEL): MAN UP! MAN UP! WAKE UP

2
(close-up of woman looking in mirror)

CHRISTINE: MANNING UP is what fucked me over- it’s why I’m angry enough to consider these things in the first place.

GRENDEL: MAN UP

3
(close up of woman’s squinting eye, behind dialogue)

CHRISTINE: He attacked me toman up’ for himself– manning up is the whole issue!

GRENDEL: Okay, feminazi, so you’re going to let him off?

CHRISTINE: He was afraid of looking vulnerable so he attacked me. Now I attack him because I feel vulnerable. It’s childish.

GRENDEL: This isn’t a fucking ESSAY

4
(frame of GRENDEL standing with arms raised in air, screaming)

GRENDEL: IT’S CALLED REVENGE

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(image of CHRISTINE looking at mirror, with GRENDEL looking up to her)

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(image of GRENDEL yelling at CHRISTINE, who seems dejected)

CHRISTINE: Reacting without thinking isn’t revenge, it’s being a dog.

GRENDEL: PUPPERS HAVE THE MOST FUN

CHRISTINE: Too dumb to question how I’ve been trained: hurt to stop my hurt. In the end, I still feel shitty. How about stopping the hurt in the first place?

GRENDEL: BLA BLA BLA BLA BLA

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(CHRISTINE looking into mirror, smiling)

CHRISTINE: There’s a smarter way.

1 comment:

  1. I really love this back and forth. Christine's raising some good points, but it's hard to deny the instinctive appeal of some of Grendel's counter-points. An elegant version of the devil on the shoulder story-trope.

    Also, "manning up is the whole issue" is a brilliant line.

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