(In the style of
Scottie Young’s L’il Marvel and Baby Marvel series.)
(6 Panels)
Panel 1: MARVEL BABY-style versions of the FANTASTIC
FOUR – REED RICHARDS, SUSAN STORM, JOHNNY STORM, and BEN GRIMM – are outside a
treehouse that very much resembles a DR. DOOM style castle. REED RICHARDS is
fiddling with a scientific-looking contraption, the other three are off to the
side a little. SUSAN STORM is carrying a couple of dolls that should resemble
FRANKLIN and VALERIA RICHARDS.
JOHNNY (1): Yo, Stretch Armstrong!
JOHNNY (2): Are you sure it’s smart to be so close to the
big scary doomhouse?
Panel 2: RICHARDS turns to look to the other three.
RICHARDS (1): Nonsense.
RICHARDS (2): Victor’s only grumpy all the time because he
needs a friend.
RICHARDS (3): I’m going to go say hello and help make him
less grumpy.
Panel 3: RICHARDS starts cranking his machine, which
looks to be extending an artificial bridge of some kind up to DR DOOM’s
treehouse of doom.
SUSAN: Are you sure about that, Reed?
GRIMM: Yeah, I think Doomboy’s just grumpy because he’s a
big ugly meaniepants.
RICHARDS: Don’t be silly, you guys…
Panel 4: Wide view as a large number of retro-style
kiddy toy ray guns attached to metal robotic arms have extended from DR DOOM’s
treehouse and are pointed at RICHARDS and his bridge machine.
DOOM TREEHOUSE (1): RICHARDS!
DOOM TREEHOUSE (2): Remove yourself from the presence of
DOOM immediately!
DOOM TREEHOUSE (3): DOOM hereby commands it!
Panel 5: The members of the FANTASTIC FOUR silently shuffle
away from DOOM’s treehouse, all of them looking directly at it as they do. RICHARDS
pulls his bridge contraption behind him.
Panel 6: RICHARDS, SUSAN, JOHNNY, and GRIMM have
moved far enough away that DOOM’s treehouse is now off panel. RICHARDS looks to
the other three.
RICHARDS: Ok, so maybe it’s not that simple after all.
GRIMM: Gee, ya think?
(END PAGE)
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