1 – A big ol' train station, with a
big ol' train not unlike the one in P.A.'s Why post taking up a good
portion of our panel space. The main difference is that we're
focused on the platform, where a line of people are boarding. Our
protagonist, Penelope, stands out, a young woman dressed in darker
colours than the rest of the travelers. If we can see it, she holds
a ticket and a sad expression.
CAPTION (PENELOPE) (1): My mother said
the city would change me.
CAPTION (PENELOPE) (2): I laughed at
the idea.
2 – Penelope walks down the aisle,
looking for her seat.
CAPTION (PENELOPE) (1): She was right,
of course.
CAPTION (PENELOPE) (2): We're always
changing.
COACHMAN (off-panel): Tickets!
Tickets!
3 – Penelope hands her ticket to the
coachman and sits down.
CAPTION (PENELOPE) (1): But sometimes a
place will change you into something you don't expect.
CAPTION (PENELOPE) (2): Something you
don't want to be.
COACHMAN: Any baggage, ma'am?
4 – Penelope looks away towards the
window, her sad expression softening.
CAPTION (PENELOPE): Fortunately.
PENELOPE (1): ...
PENELOPE (2): No.
5 – Outside of the train as it pulls
out of the station, looking at Penelope looking out the window. She
wears a small smile.
CAPTION (PENELOPE): There's always
somewhere new.
PENELOPE: Not anymore.
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