Page 1 – (11 Panels)
Layout: Like the sixteen panel grid format Frank
Miller used in DKR – four panels across the top, four panels underneath, one
panel in the third row and a larger Panel
10 with an insert in spot sixteen taking up the remainder of the page.
1.1: The cover to the first edition trade
paperback of Batman: The Dark Knight Returns. It’s brand new, right off the shelf.
Caption: Once upon a time there was a book.
1.2: Interior, a small apartment, Christmas Morning. A Boy of ten or eleven holding the book from Panel 1.1, smiling broadly. There is wrapping paper littering the carpet
and a decorated Christmas Tree just behind the Boy.
Caption: And on a magical Christmas morning a boy was
gifted this book.
1.3: Interior, evening, a private hospital room in
a sterile pediatrics ward. The Boy from Panel 1.2 is lying in a hospital bed,
hooked up to an IV.
Caption: Shortly thereafter, the boy was imprisoned
for what, to a young boy, seemed like an eternity.
1.4: The Boy sitting up in the hospital bed,
reading Batman: The Dark Knight Returns.
It’s night and the only light source is a lamp on his bedside
table.
Caption: And the boy was left with only the book.
1.5: Interior, night, the Boy’s room in the
apartment from Panel 1.2. He’s out of the hospital and sitting at a
desk, drawing. The desk is lit by a
single desk lamp and the boy is wearing pajamas.
Caption: The boy lived inside the book, and knew that
he wanted to make a book too.
1.6: What the Boy’s drawing: an extremely crude
replica of a Frank Miller style Batman.
Caption: But alas, the book was a force of nature and could
never me replicated.
1.7: The Boy, a teenager now, sitting at an old
1990-style word processor. He’s behind
the same desk from Panel 1.5,
wearing a flannel shirt and blue jeans.
Caption: He learned about words and for what they were
meant.
1.8: The Boy, in his late twenties or early
thirties, in a business suit, standing before a group of other people in
business suits. They are sitting around
a conference table, watching the grown-up Boy giving a Power Point
presentation.
Caption: But he forgot then what he knows now and was an
imitation of a happy man.
1.9: Repeat of Panel 1.1, only a very well-worn and beaten copy.
Caption: Then he remembered his old friend, the book -
1.10: Large panel taking up half of the page of the
Boy, now in his late-thirties or early forties, sitting at a desk, typing away
on a laptop. He’s wearing a grey t-shirt
and black pants. On the desk next to the
laptop is the battered book from Panel
1.9.
Caption: Becoming the boy again.
Caption: This will be a good life . . .
1.11: Inset to Panel 1.10, where a sixteenth panel would be if the 4 x 4 grid structure
had been maintained for the entire page, and the smirking face of the grown-up
Boy.
Caption: . . . good enough.
This is a beautiful script, Derek. A terrific homage to The Dark Knight Returns while also laying down some earnest biographical moments that all comes together in that final echo of the book's oft-repeated phrase. Lovely stuff.
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