1 - Establishing shot of a big, top-card boxing match. We're talking huge arena, large crowd, flashbulbs going off - all that jazz. Two boxers, one in red trunks and one in blue, stand facing each other in the ring. We're far out, but it's still clear that Blue is a much bigger fighter.
CAPTION (RED): Everyone knew it was going to be a bloodbath.
2 - The fighters are touching gloves, but we're focused on Red. As before, he's noticeably smaller and he looks pretty miserable.
CAPTION (RED): Even me.
3 - We're into the fight. Blue takes a big haymaker swing; Red barely manages to get out of the way.
CAPTION (RED): But when the fight started.
4 - Blue takes another massive swing. Red dodges again, manging to evade with more grace this time around.
CAPTION (RED): I couldn't help wondering.
5 - Red lunges forward and lands a punch right in Blue's face.
NO COPY
6 - On Blue, his nose bleeding. Going cross-eyed to look at it, he looks somewhat ridiculous. But he also look furious.
NO COPY
7 - On Red. He wears a look of determination on his face, his gloves up to protect himself / attack again. I imagine this panel long and thin, crossing the bottom of the page - a cinematic pose.
CAPTION (RED): What if?
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