1 - Golden-Age style panel of Rex Tyler in his lab working with chemicals and the like.
REX (1): Gee whiz! I really want my date with Wendi to go well, but I get so tongue-tied around her.
REX (2): Maybe there's some way to focus my brain's control of language...
2 - Present day. A grandfatherly Rex Tyler sits on an easy chair in his living room, regaling two grandkids with his fantastic tale. Rick Tyler sits on a couch in the background, smiling. Wendi looks in at the living room doorway, smiling. The grandkids look over to her interjection.
REX: And so I--
WENDI (interrupting): Are you telling that Lyriclo story again?
3 - Wendi walks in and kisses the top of Rex's head. Rex is somewhat embarrassed.
WENDI: I seem to remember you admitting you were actually hoping to create Desirablo.
4 - Wendi walks back towards the doorway, smiling to herself. Rex covers his face a bit to try to hide his blush / embarrassment. Rick and the grandkids laugh heartily.
WENDI: You're lucky you have such a winning personality...
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