8.1: The brothers climb out of the car and start advancing towards the building. Brian has a mic stand, Bruce has his acoustic guitar, and Larry has a banjo. The queued up crowd have their hands raised cheering the brothers on.
1. CROWD: Woooo!
8.2: The main lobby to the building is filled with PEOPLE all wearing Good Brothers t-shirts and hats and selling merchandise.
8.3: They make their way through the crowd; people are reaching out to touch them.
8.4: The brothers enter the THEATER. It’s picturesque—it’s an old OPERA HOUSE they’re in. There is an announcer on the main stage.
1. ANNOUNCER: Ladies and gentlemen, I give you the GOOD BROTHERS!
8.5: The brothers are on the stage now and BRIAN is speaking into the microphone.
BRIAN: Why thank you for having us. It took a lot for all three of us to get here, and there are some party crashers—
8.6: The cops try to get into the building but the people in the line are blocking the door and it’s hard for cops to push through the crowd.
CAPTION [BRIAN]: --So it would be great if you could prevent them from entering the building and disturbing us!
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