Panel
1
Exterior,
day. A beat-up old camaro pulls into the gravel parking lot of a
rough looking road-side diner.
Panel
2
Interior,
day, diner. Two brothers around the same age, one wearing denim and
the other flannel and a cowboy hat, walk quietly through
the double
doors of the
diner. The manager, a middle-aged man wearing a short sleeve
button-up and a tie, walks towards the brothers. The diner is a giant
mess with waitresses cleaning broken dishes
and food off the ground, though it doesn't look like it's helping.
1.
MANAGER: Sorry, no service right now.
Panel
3
The
brothers talk with the manager as the denim-brother holds out a photo
to the manager.
2.
DENIM-BROTHER: You seen this man?
3.
MANAGER: Yeah, that's the bastard who did all this then ran the hell
outta here.
Panel
4
The
brothers turn to leave as the one in flannel shoots another question
at the manager.
4.
FLANNEL-BROTHER: Which way did he go?
5.
MANAGER: East. Wait--
Panel
5
The
two brothers respond at the same time as they walk out the double
doors
of the diner.
6.
MANAGER (OP): Who are you?
7.
BROTHERS: His brothers.
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