I guess I'm the only one who took a literal interpretation of the prompt.
PAGE FOUR.
4.1: The Singer
extends his hand down to Sax Man.
1. SINGER: I
love you and you love me.
4.2: The SAX
player is up to the stage and let’s make this a big, wide panel because we’re
going to slowly pan out of the scene as the band plays the song.
2. DISPLAY: And
there's a new fruit humming in the old fruit trees
4.3: Panning wider
out and we can see the wreckage of the bar. However there is still the
occasional hipster, who probably hid under a table, dancing in this panel.
3. DISPLAY: In
the wake I'm waiting in a parking lot
4.4: Out of the
bar and back to the street. The bar’s
sign looking down at the white car.
DISPLAY: He's
jealous of me and what we've got. He can rattle his bell in shining shoe
and never in doubt where I found you
and never in doubt where I found you
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