Detective Beam: I hate Mondays. Two totaled cars... no bodies... looks like they fell into the canyon...those poor bastards.
2. Zoom in on Detective Beam, now frowning
Constable Sam: Detective - we’re still searching but so far all we’ve found is a bottle of iron pills in one car and a smashed bottle of red wine in the other.
Detective Beam: Get me something – I can’t ID the white car because the license plate is rusted so right now we have nothing to go on.
Detective Beam: Certainly looks like an accident – but it will take until morning to find the bodies in the canyon. I definitely have a strange fee-
Constable Noteworthy: Detective! You’d better come see this!
4. Over Detective Beam’s shoulder, we can see he is holding a wedding photo
Detective Beam: We already ID’d the driver of the black car from his license plate. Why should I care about an old wedding photo?
Constable Noteworthy: Because we found the same exact picture in both cars.
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