Panel
1
Exterior,
night, city park. A couple, man and woman in their late twenties,
have been cornered in a dark city park. A street gang of about four
thugs surrounds them, a two
of them holding sticks like
clubs. The couple looks
scared as the thugs menace them.
1.
THUG 1: Bet you thought you'd cut through our park without paying for
it.
2.
THUG 2: That shit don't fly.
Panel
2
Two
thugs viciously attack the man, punching him, as he calls for help.
Another thug grabs onto the woman's wrist. The remaining thug
watches.
3. MAN : Help--
4.
MAN (sfx): Oof!
Panel
3
Tendrils
of ill-defined shadow
pull the thugs away from the couple and into the darkness. The couple
huddle close to each other on the ground.
5.
THUG 1: Aaaahhh!
6.
THUG 2: Gaaah!
Panel
4
The
couple look out quietly into the suddenly quiet night as they hold
each other. The thugs have completely disappeared.
Panel
5
The
woman helps the man to walk as she keeps an alert look out into the
darkness.
7. WOMAN: T-thank you. Whoever you are…
Panel
6
The
woman and man limp through the park, as
a response sounds around them.
8. SHADOWS (dark lettering): You're welcome.
-END-
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