Panel 1
Hansen
and Olson walk up to the edge of a cliff. It's very clear that the
edge of the cliff leads to steep and far fall. Hansen is leading the
pair.
1.
Hansen: This is the seventh and last challenge.
2.
Hansen: “The step taken by those who do not fear death.”
Panel
2
Olsen
peers over the side of the cliff very cautiously as Hansen stands
away from the edge steeling himself. Olsen looks very doubtful as he
speaks.
3.
Olsen: Yeah, right. You'll end up in the afterlife whether you pass
the challenge or not.
4.
Olsen: You sure you'll be able to make it back? You know, once you
found her.
Panel
3
Inset
to Panel 4. Hansen grits his teeth in determination.
5.
Hansen: Don't know. But...
Panel
4
Hansen
dives off the cliff edge. Olsen stands back, shocked by what his
friend has done.
6.
Hansen: ...I'll bring her back from the dead or die trying!
Panel
5
Olsen
covers his eyes from a brilliant green flash that comes from the edge
of the cliff.
Panel
6
Olsen
looks over the edge of the cliff. There is no sign of Hansen
anywhere.
7.
Olsen: Look's like you made it, buddy. I hope you can bring her back.
-END-
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