Go – Go The Distance – MK Stangeland Jr.
(6 Panels)
Panel 1: A normal looking city street. Not highly
active, but there are a handful of people going about their normal day.
Panel 2: The people react to something approaching
from off-panel.
LEAD GNOME: (Off-Panel)
STROKE! STROKE! STROKE!
Panel 3: A team of seven GNOMES push a small longboat
down the street, which seemingly ‘floats’ on top of the road. Six of the gnomes
are rowing, the seventh is calling strokes and coordinating their movement.
LEAD GNOME: STROKE! STROKE! STROKE!
Panel 4: The people watch dumbfounded as the boat
keeps going on past them.
LEAD GNOME: (Off-Panel) STROKE! STROKE! STROKE!
Panel 5: The people turn and watch in shock as
another boat pushes through, similar to the first, but is crewed by seven DWARVES
instead of GNOMES.
LEAD DWARF: STROKE! STROKE! STROKE!
Panel 6: The people stand and watch without any clue
what to do or how to react to the two boats rowing down the street, one after
the other.
LEAD GNOME: STROKE! STROKE! STROKE! STROKE!
LEAD DWARF: STROKE! STROKE! STROKE! STROKE!
(END PAGE)
I like this one because it encapsulates my initial confusion at the video. I didn't really know what to make of it and neither do the observers in this page. Question: was there supposed to be dialogue in panel 4?
ReplyDeleteAs a matter of fact, there was.
DeleteAnd now there is.
Thanks for catching that.
Sure man.
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