Panel 1
External,
day. A DOCTOR with a clipboard stands by the side of a track. BOB,
seen only from the abdomen and up, stands on the track ready to go.
BOB is wearing goggles.
1.
DOCTOR: We can start when you're ready. Just do your best.
2.
BOB: Let's do this.
Panel
2
Seen
from above. BOB runs along the track and has already made
considerable distance from his starting point near the DOCTOR.
3.
DOCTOR: GO!!!
Panel
3
Split
panel. Top split: BOB races across the panel in a blur. Bottom split:
A speedometer in the DOCTOR's hand reads "98 MPH".
Panel
4
BOB
leans against a wall, huffing and puffing. The DOCTOR, standing
nearby, talks excitedly. BOB can still only be seen from the abdomen
and up.
4.
DOCTOR: Incredible! You beat all of my wildest expectations!
5.
BOB: Yeah… That was… good.
Panel
5
BOB
and the DOCTOR shake hands, both very happy. This panel has a full
reveal of BOB, with cybernetic prosthetic legs.
6.
DOCTOR: Are you willing to
do more experiments with the prosthetics?
7.
BOB: Hell yes!
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I really like the split panel effect--that was cool, but a question I have is the layout of the page. Is Panel 4 supposed to be on the same tier as Panel 3, and five is on the third tier? Has a kind of John Cassaday feel to it.
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