(6 Panels)
Panel 1: DRONE stands in front of a skeleton, an
image very similar to that of the PROMPT IMAGE.
Panel 2: DRONE looks around for something. It looks
suspicious.
HANK: (Off panel)
Did it work?
HENRY (Off panel)
Shhh…You’re going to give us away.
Panel 3: DRONE looks down at the skeleton. Words of
some kind comes from it in an inhuman language.
DRONE (1): (Inhuman
gibberish)
DRONE (2): (More
inhuman gibberish)
DRONE (3): (Yet more
inhuman gibberish)
HANK (Off panel)
What is it doing?
HENRY (Off panel)
I said shush!
Panel 4: Reveal of HANK and HENRY – two soldiers in
futuristic sci-fi gear - hiding on the other side of a ridge near the DRONE,
which can still be seen in the background looking in HANK and HENRY’s general
direction. HENRY is holding something up that peeks just above the ridge which
allows him to see what’s on the other side.
DRONE: (Continuing
inhuman gibberish)
HANK: Excuse me if I’m antsy about the creep.
HENRY: Excuse me
if I’m panicking on the inside about you leading it to us.
Panel 5: The DRONE walks off. HENRY is noticeably relieved.
HENRY: *whew*
HANK: That mean it’s gone?
Panel 6: HENRY stays close to the ground as he begins
to make an escape from the ridge. HANK looks about to follow.
HENRY (1): Shutup, ya idiot.
HENRY (2): We got to get this back to base ASAP.
HANK: Hey look! Something we can agree on.
(END PAGE)
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