Panel 1
Exterior,
dark, alien planet. An astronaut in a bulky space suit steps out of a
shuttle-like craft that has landed in the dirt of the alien world. A
large light shines from the top of his helmet out into the darkness
of the world. The planet is dirt and rock.
1.
ASTRONAUT: Surface contact established. Sending readings now.
2.
RADIO (op): Confirmed.
Panel
2
The
astronaut walks away from the shuttle, preceded by the beam of his
head lamp.
3.
ASTRONAUT: Initiating immediate environmental recon.
4.
RADIO (op): Confirmed. Looks like a pretty barren world.
Panel
3
The
astronaut climbs a slope
of rock and dirt.
5.
ASTRONAUT: I'm not sure we'll find much besides single cell life.
6.
RADIO (op): Too bad.
7.
RADIO (op): How's it feel to be the first man on this moon?
Panel
4
The
astronaut stands at the top of the slope, looking down at the ground.
His helmet light illuminates an unseen patch of ground.
8.
ASTRONAUT: Worrisome.
9.
RADIO (op): What? Why?
Panel
5
The
astronaut stands next to a set of human bones, his helmet light fully
circling and illuminating the remains.
10.
ASTRONAUT: Looks like I'm not the first.
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