Friday, July 22, 2016

I HATE FAIRYLAND: "Mother Goose" -- David Press.

PAGE ONE.

1.1: A close-up shot on a Duck’s bill with a cigarette hanging out.

MOTHER [O.P]:                    When Diddle Diddle died I had to do something to keep all my kids in cozy dens for the winter.

1.2: On MOTHER GOOSE's feathered hands: she's turning over a TWENTY DOLLAR BILL onto a stack of twenties.

MOTHER [O.P.]:                   That’s when Gert introduced me to her crop.

1.3: Let’s have one more shot of the same size and we’ve teased to the right of the money and we see a PILE of blueish-green-and-pink FAIRY DUST piled on the table.

MOTHER:                              Given all of her horrible crap, people in Fairyland just want to escape the terror and I’m happy to deliver.

1.4: Panning all the way out so we can see MOTHER GOOSE’s face as she smokes the cigarette, counts the money, and speaks to us. She has a scar across her left eye.

MOTHER:                              I mean, shit, we all need a little escapism from our daily horrible realities.


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5 comments:

  1. I like the idea of the fairy tale creatures needing their own escapism. Clever.

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  2. Like Perry, I really like the idea you have here of bringing "everyday" concerns to the realm of Fairyland - transplanting the mundane to fictional lands is always fun in my books. However - and I may be missing something - but I don't follow the logic of Gert being related to the fairy dust / crop. The picture you paint is enticing, but those captions in the middle brought me out of things as I couldn't fit those details into the larger whole.

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    1. Ohh. Do you mean that you don't get how Gert is related to the overall page? Really, I just inserted her in the story to tie it into the prompt, but I haven't read the comic so I'm not sure whether that's a thing the character would do.

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    2. Hmm. I read it as Gert discovering Mother Goose trafficking fairy dust and giving her what for with a riding crop for, I dunno, not getting a cut. Hence the scar. But, since a desperate mother is a desperate mother and the drug trade is dependable business in Fairyland, especially under Gertrude's rule, Mother Goose keeps it going. Albeit with a little more discretion.

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    3. Oooh! I'd never actually heard the term "riding crop" before now and assumed that crop in the text meant Mother Goose was sourcing the dust from Gert (in a more agricultural sense) instead of Gert unleashing some pain on her. This makes more sense to me now.

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