(5 Panels)
Panel 1: A sailing vessel of a science fantasy
nature, with a post-apocalyptic design aesthetic – the PHANTOM ADMIRAL. It’s
passing through what appears to be an invisible wall of some kind as it sails through
a foggy mist, the only indication of the ‘wall’ is a ripple effect in the air
around it.
SFX: (Trails off as it
goes on) whhmn whhmn whhmn whhmn whhmn whhmn whhmn whhmn…
Panel 2: The bow of the PHANTOM ADMIRAL. The fog
around the ship has mostly vanished. There stands CAPTAIN VERNE, a
post-apocalyptic-style pirate or mercenary captain of the dashing sort. Next to
him is HAWKENS.
HAWKENS: Where are we?
CAPTAIN VERNE: Exactly.
Panel 3: HAWKENS looks to CAPTAIN VERNE, very
confused. VERNE has a stupid, mile-long grin on his face, like he’s trolling,
even if he’s not.
HAWKENS: What?
CAPTAIN VERNE: heh heh
Panel 4: Panel switches to look out on the water from
behind VERNE and HAWKENS. VERNE holds his arm out to indicate to a lone island,
one that closely resembles the island from the LONELY ISLAND photo.
CAPTAIN VERNE (1): Welcome to our not-so-humble home.
CAPTAIN VERNE (2): Which, as far as anyone is concerned,
doesn’t actually exist.
HAWKENS (1): That supposed to include you?
CAPTAIN VERNE (3): Heh.
CAPTAIN VERNE (4): Yep!
HAWKENS (2): How does that even…
Panel 5: View of the island as the PHANTOM ADMIRAL
pulls up alongside it next to the side with the elevated tower.
CAPTAIN VERNE (1): Don’t think about it too hard, kid.
CAPTAIN VERNE (2): The only thing you’ll accomplish is
hurting yourself.
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I like what you did with the numbering here, MK, it helped to get an idea of who is speaking when and whether it's attached.
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