External, night, sea. A small leisure boat heaves in the large white-capped waves of the sea. The dark gray clouds roll overhead. The boat is battling its way through a storm.
1. SFX (waves): CRASSSSHHH!
NEIL shouts across the small cabin of the boat as he clings to the cabin railings for his life. The boat heaves around him. NEIL is drenched from head to toe.
2. NEIL: WE GOTTA GO!
3. NEIL: WE'RE GONNA DIE OUT HERE!
SEAN grips the wheel with a mad desperation as he glares intensely out of the window and shouts back his reply. He is also soaked.
4. SEAN: I THINK I SEE SOMETHING!
5. SEAN: I'M GOING FOR IT!
The little boat boat rocks sideways against a large wave as it makes its way to a distant structure. The structure is an ominous concrete platform with concrete buildings. At the corners of each building is a bright light, highlighting it's presence.
6. SEAN (from the boat): IT'S OUR BEST SHOT!
A bolt of lighting backlights the silhouette of the concrete structure, giving it a horrible and ominous appearance. The sea continues to churn around the small boat.
7. SFX (lightning): KAAATTTTSSHHHH!
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Nice with the bolt of lightning, Perry. I do think you do that a lot--the ominous bolt of lightning. So what do you like about it?ReplyDelete