1.1 WIDE: Scraps of body parts lay scattered all over a rooftop: an arm here, a leg there, shredded pieces of cape with some errant pieces of a unitard lay all over the place. Obviously, this is the crime scene that we find CHRISTIAN WALKER and DEENA PILGRIM in.
PILGRIM [OP]: They do just drop out of the sky right?
1.2: We’re on a rooftop with CHRISTIAN WALKER and DEENA PILGRIM. They are staring down at the TORSO of a white unitard.
1.3: Walker kneels down to look at the emblem. In the center of the white shirt is a yellow emblem with a RED FLAG in it.
WALKER: It’s Flag Man. Probably got caught in an airplane turbine.
1.4: Walker stands up next to Pilgrim, they look down at the body.
PILGRIM: Stupid capes.
Like Perry's entry, another great example of taking the over-the-top nature of cap stories and bringing down to something more grounded (if you'll pardon the pun). I appreciate how matter of fact Walker is throughout.ReplyDelete
Question for you: why did you give Pilgrim that last line? And if you'll forgive a suggestion, what would you think of finishing with Walker or Pilgrim (or both) looking up at the sky instead of continuing to look at the corpse?