(As I was thinking of
a script for this week, I remembered the time we had a week for that thing
called “Phonogram”, and decided to write a script set in said world.)
(5 Panels)
Panel 1: Final concert for THE TRAGICALLY HIP – the
members a loading onto a ship in the background of the stage that resembles the
one from the CONCERT POSTER from this weeks prompt.
CROWD (Off-panel):
Encore! Encore! Encore!
Panel 2: Lined up on the ship, the band begins to
play.
SFX: (Music Notes)
Panel 3: Back of the ship – the part that looks like
it came from a record player – starts playing music notes.
SFX: (Music Notes)
Panel 4: Bottom of the ship, where the parts of the
stage keeping it in place pull away.
SFX: (Music Notes)
Panel 5: The ship flies up and over the crowds, who
go absolutely wild.
SFX: (Lots and lots of Music Notes)
SFX: (Cheering)
(END PAGE)
I like the idea and visuals you have here, but my brain can't stop thinking that I've never been to a show where people little shout "Encore". I know it is nitpicky, but that line really took me out of the headspace I think you were aiming for here.
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