Tuesday, September 6, 2016

Concert Posters (The Tragically Hip) – Epic Sendoff – MK Stangeland, Jr.

(As I was thinking of a script for this week, I remembered the time we had a week for that thing called “Phonogram”, and decided to write a script set in said world.)

(5 Panels)

Panel 1: Final concert for THE TRAGICALLY HIP – the members a loading onto a ship in the background of the stage that resembles the one from the CONCERT POSTER from this weeks prompt.

CROWD (Off-panel): Encore! Encore! Encore!

Panel 2: Lined up on the ship, the band begins to play.

SFX: (Music Notes)

Panel 3: Back of the ship – the part that looks like it came from a record player – starts playing music notes.

SFX: (Music Notes)

Panel 4: Bottom of the ship, where the parts of the stage keeping it in place pull away.

SFX: (Music Notes)

Panel 5: The ship flies up and over the crowds, who go absolutely wild.

SFX: (Lots and lots of Music Notes)

SFX: (Cheering)


1 comment:

  1. I like the idea and visuals you have here, but my brain can't stop thinking that I've never been to a show where people little shout "Encore". I know it is nitpicky, but that line really took me out of the headspace I think you were aiming for here.


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