PAGE ONE: Four wide panels.
1.1: Coming in
with an aerial shot of She-Hulk’s Jay Street office building—it’s a beautiful
clear day without a cloud in the sky and a blazing yellow sun.
CAPTION: 68
JAY STREET. BROOKLYN, NY.
1.2: Interior of
the office building: specifically, the office of Jennifer Walters, She-Hulk,
same office configuration as the Charles Soule/Javier Pulido run on the title.
Jen is on the left hand-side of the panel, closest to the window and facing the
door; ANGIE HUANG is opposite facing the reader; PATSY WALKER—Hellcat—has her
back to us.
Make it so the picture rumbles a little bit like the
building has been hit by an earthquake.
CAPTION: The
law offices of Jennifer Walters, ESQ.,
PLLC Attorney-at-law.
SFX: RUMBLE.
1.3: Jennifer,
Patsy, and Angie rush out into the hallway where the rest of the 68 Jay Street
tenants are standing. Let’s have some wavy lines around everything showing the
picture is shaking.
JENNIFER is helping SHARON—the landlord—up to her feet.
SHE-HULK: I’ve
got you…
SHARON: Everyone
to the shel—
VOICE [No Tail]: I’m
looking for JENNIFER WALTERS.
1.4: They’re down
the stairs from the office building and staring at a red brick wall that is
taking the shape of a human figure.
JENNIFER: That’s
me. To whom am I speaking?
1.5: The WALL
FIGURE extends out and it shows a distorted, plant-humanoid figure in the wall.
VOICE: GORE!
The son of the LIVING ISLAND!
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